Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society.

It is irrefutable that the trend of people growing number has taken a mammoth dimension. There are debates between those who believe that
overpopulation
can cause severe problems in the entire world and those who think that increasing rates of
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opulation may have
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ositive impact on global financial and social factors.
This
essay will examine both views before giving a final opinion. On the one hand,
overpopulation
can lead to a lack of vital resources. Food products, fossil and drinking water – without these things humans are tend to die.
For instance
, People suffer from drought and famine in some parts of India where
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uantity of people surpasses the daily consumption norm of food.
Moreover
, these people are trapped
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the circle of poorness and unemployment.
Therefore
, they unable to buy even a piece of bread.
On the other hand
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ncrease in
population
can have certain positive impacts on economy and society.
To begin
, countries with
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igh level of
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opulation as a rule never experience
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shortage.
Therefore
, some countries with lower populace level attract immigrants to fill their gaps in the labour market.
Furthermore
,
overpopulation
can cause healthy competition among citizens.
For example
, Chinese motivated to study hard because of the huge number of people per
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working place.
As a result
, citizens of China are tent to be highly qualified and skilled in comparison with other nations. To put in a nutshell, even
although
overpopulation
has some demerits as
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ack of essential for life resources, it has
also
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ertain positive impact on the World’s economy and society.
Therefore
, I believe that some measures should be taken to equal distribution of
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opulation over the world.
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