Rising university fees and limited employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and should only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been claiming that finding the right cure for illness is the best way to improve public
health
.
However
, providing funds for researching and developing drugs might not always the optimal solution to reduce
health
issues.
This
essay will discuss why I completely agree that there should be more concentration in findings ways that can impede sickness from distributing among people.
Firstly
, the government would save a large amount of money by encouraging people to follow a healthy style and balanced diets
instead
of spending exacerbate funds on treatments that would probably cause people to become more dependent on them.
Hence
, Governments have to invest financially in the methods and practices that can assist in impeding people from getting sick. An illustration to
this
point, hand sanitizer has been considered an effective way to shield people from viruses and bacteria that can cause diseases.
Hence
, allocating funds for protection against
health
issues is more effective in terms of cost-saving. Another reason, to deal with issues surrounding the
health
problems, requiring immediate solutions by tackling the ways that get people sick
instead
of waiting for a long process of developing medicine. Public authorities should finance the campaigns and processes that stimulate people to follow the safety and
health
guidelines for becoming more fitter and active because it enhances their immune system against any major upcoming viruses. To sum up, it is often claiming that prevention is the best route to tackle diseases
instead
of taking drugs
that is
less effective in the long
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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