Employers should give their workers at least one month’s holiday a year, as it makes them better at their job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is an opinion that employees need to be given a chance to have a vacation

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at least one month in a year to make them more productive in their job. In my point of view, it is a reasonable statement and I totally agree.

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of all,

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oliday is a

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to balance

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motional and physical condition for workers.

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The workload

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that the employees get

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and interactions with other people in the office can be tiresome and decrease their stamina and mood. If it happens in a long

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without any break, it can make

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damage to

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mployee's health status. So

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, a

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to break is necessary for workers to get back their stamina and good emotions.

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, a long vacation can be a great

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to look for a new experience. By leaving office activities for

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, employees can contemplate and rethink what they have done and the result they can get back to the work environment with new ideas to boost their productivity.

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, it is part of the worker law that company should give their workers enough

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to rest. The rule of

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ay off and holiday for employees were written in the law of

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so that companies cannot deny it.

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, there is a regulation about the

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of days women worker can stay at home after giving birth or when the employees are sick. Overall, I believed that giving enough holiday for employees is

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ight thing to enhance their productivity and the employers should have to consider it.