Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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some people consider that persons have to be in charge of tackle

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the global climate changing, other people believe that

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responses are of government and corporations. Personally, I support the latter view because authorities and industries have more opportunity to cope with

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since they have more

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pollution

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ause of the Global warming, even though people can help

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overnment to separate

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dealing with

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as the climate changing, and one of their duties

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situation is separating their

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at home.

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waste

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can be recycled,

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, not will pollute water,

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and ground. If people do not divide their rubbish, recycling plants will not be able to separate and recycle it.

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, all unseparated

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usually is buried in the ground and permeates into underground water and

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bligatory separating of trash in Japan led to

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pollution

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rates are extremely lower

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in Russia.

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, I side with those who believe that corporations and governments

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resolve

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is because they have more

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one person,

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, not only can they spend

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for inventing and creating

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prevented mechanisms, but they

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can buy new water and

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filters for industrial plants and fabrics which are the key to the pure nature. It is known that the majority of

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appear in

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may be reduced by improving purification systems. In conclusion, while some people believe that only individuals can tackle with the global change by

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dividing, others believe that governments and corporations can deal with

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efficiently due to

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arge amount of

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for preventing huge sized pollutions.

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, I believe that massive organizations and authorities are rather responsible for cope with

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crucial

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than persons.