Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Although
some people consider that persons have to be in charge of tackle
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the global climate changing, other people believe that
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responses are of government and corporations. Personally, I support the latter view because authorities and industries have more opportunity to cope with
this
problem
since they have more
money
for
prevent
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pollution
which is
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ause of the Global warming, even though people can help
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overnment to separate
waste
. Admittedly, some people believe that individuals
response
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for
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dealing with
such
problem
as the climate changing, and one of their duties
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improve
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this
situation is separating their
waste
at home.
This
is because
this
waste
can be recycled,
therefore
, not will pollute water,
air
and ground. If people do not divide their rubbish, recycling plants will not be able to separate and recycle it.
Moreover
, all unseparated
waste
usually is buried in the ground and permeates into underground water and
air
. To illustrate,
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bligatory separating of trash in Japan led to
air
pollution
rates are extremely lower
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in Russia.
On the other hand
, I side with those who believe that corporations and governments
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resolve
this
problem
.
This
is because they have more
money
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one person,
therefore
, not only can they spend
this
money
for inventing and creating
pollution
prevented mechanisms, but they
also
can buy new water and
air
filters for industrial plants and fabrics which are the key to the pure nature. It is known that the majority of
pollution
appear in
such
kind of works,
nevertheless
,
this
may be reduced by improving purification systems. In conclusion, while some people believe that only individuals can tackle with the global change by
waste
dividing, others believe that governments and corporations can deal with
this
problem
efficiently due to
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arge amount of
money
for preventing huge sized pollutions.
Therefore
, I believe that massive organizations and authorities are rather responsible for cope with
this
crucial
problem
than persons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • phenomenon
  • responsibility
  • address
  • crucial role
  • impact
  • collaboration
  • carbon footprint
  • regulations
  • policies
  • incentivize
  • act responsibly
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