The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some communities argued that if we have to visit any place or hill station we want to visit in a group with the help of road mentor.I believe that whenever we have to travel we should take the travel pilot. On one side,whenever people outing they prefer to call with their family because it contains a healthy and joyful environment.Our country Pakistan is a beautiful country.Many visitors come to Pakistan to ride because Pakistan has the lands of high adventure and nature.The Karakoram highway which follows the ancient silk road and taking the beauty of Himalayan mountain range.Many foreigners come to visit different kinds of places with the help of trek counsellor because they do not know the places.They feel much relax with
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ocal visitor does not need any kind of guides because they are much familiar about those places.It is an expense to care for a circuit mentor with us.We
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our teacher can be helpful to us to model in a proper way.
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  • convenience
  • safety
  • organization
  • knowledgeable
  • itinerary
  • local customs
  • language barrier
  • freedom
  • flexibility
  • random
  • spontaneous
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