Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people said that graduation from university is the most ideal way to have a good

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,Whereas other argued that gaining experience and developing a new set of skills is more essential.

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acquiring the skills

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the key factor to get a good

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.training gives a full set of knowledge and skills to do something as it can be specific to the need , vocation and

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according to the skill-gab . It is the acquisition of knowledge with the intent of developing a specific set of skills and /or behaviour.Its purpose is to improve performance and productivity. It is there for people who

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I agree with those who believe that education and certificates are the necessary factors to get a good

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. Education is a process through which we learn facts , concepts and theories with a goal of acquiring knowledge. It is the systematic way to gain information about facts , events, concepts , beliefs or principles surrounding a topic. Its purpose is to help develop a sense of reasoning, understanding, judgment and intellect in an individual to make them capable of learning how to think and problem

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being experienced and well skilled could be still the main features to have the best career, I strongly believe that graduating university is

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because education creates the foundation upon which to build

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training and being experienced is more according the specific skills that should be developed.