Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Monetary transactions are a constant life part of our life and to do that we either exchange
currancy
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currency
or swiping our cards. These days opting for credit or debit cards
instead
of actual
money
is increasing popularly,
however
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this
can have both positive and negative implications.
This
essay will discuss that while
this
can be beneficial to the customer and the seller, it does have some limitations as well. Certain advantages
makes
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plastic
money
a preferable choice for people.
This
includes not only the
convienece
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convenience
of carrying cards
arounds
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around
around as
opposed to
mutiple
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multiple
notes but
also
there are always added benefits from companies who provide these cards. For most people
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it is difficult to carry large sums of
money
without worrying they
maybe
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robbed or might lose it, so having to carry just one card makes it easier and less stressful.
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most banks offer additional offers like a discount on fuel, restaurants and even travel tickets.
Therefore
these advantages
makes
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plastic
money
desiarable
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desirable
for users. 
On the other hand
, there are a few shortcomings associated with debit and credit cards as well. They can be misused if they get into the wrong hands,
moreover
if not
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regulated
it can cause
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financial problems to the banks. In 2010 maximum robberies had taken place not through break-ins but
instead
through credit card fraud.
Such
challenges have often
occured
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occurred
when not using actual banknotes. The debate about currency versus cards for payments will always continue, as there will forever be some
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and
non favorable
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attributes associated with it.
This
essay discussed both the pros and cons of
such
forms of
money
.
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