You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: -Give details of what went wrong -Explain what you had to do to overcome the problem -Say what action you would like the manager to take.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my

dissapointment

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at the quality of service received at my just concluded stay at the Sunrise View Hotel, Abuja. I stayed in one of the Executive rooms from October 18th-October 22nd. There was no air-conditioning or cooling system available in the particular room where I was lodged. I had to leave the windows open throughout my stay and

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was very displeasing to me. I complained severally to the front desk and had

techncians

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sent to my room to attempt to fix the problem, all to no avail. I

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asked for

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a room change but

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did not work out as all rooms were fully booked. I would like a full refund of the money I spent and a 3-day booking any week during the summer holiday as compensation for

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. I expect a response to my letter within a week or I would have no other option than to escalate my complaint to higher authorities. Yours faithfully, Joy Una

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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