More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The culture of
work
from
home
has gained much popularity in
the
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recent times.
Although
there are many benefits of working from
home
rather than working from
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ffice, some people believe
otherwise
. I believe working from
home
has more positive impacts only if one maintains the same level of discipline of working in the
office
. Clearly, convenience is one of the major perks of doing the job at
home
in a homely environment with comfortable clothes. These
increases
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the efficiency of an individual because of the comfortable environment and time management. An economic forum study has stated that 85%
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people have shown more potential working from
home
than working from the
office
.
Furthermore
, working from
home
eliminates the travel stress and it
also
saves travel time. Most of the people travel from suburbs to city for
work
on peak hours every day. A person in a
mega city
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like Mumbai spends 1/3rd of his or her
life
in the day-to-day commute to
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ffice. Because
of
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working from
home
people are healthier and sounder in their duties. On the other end, some people
also
believe that performing duties from
home
causes
work
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life
imbalance. Often, people do not observe the level of discipline which they maintain while working from
o
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ffice. Because of the comfort of a homely environment, it becomes difficult to manage
work
and personal
life
both simultaneously. The increased workload usually disrupts the personal as well as professional
life
.
Consequently
, every good
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has
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its downside.
However
, the benefits clearly
outweighs
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the demerits.
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  • Telecommuting
  • Flexi-time
  • Remote work
  • Work-life integration
  • Virtual collaboration
  • Self-discipline
  • Workspace
  • Burnout
  • Ergonomics
  • Time management
  • Distractions
  • Productivity
  • Commuting
  • Connectivity issues
  • Team dynamics
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