The given pie charts illustrate the information on comparison of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015.

The given pie charts illustrate the information on comparison of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015.
The given pie charts illustrate the information on
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of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015.
Overall
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pharmaceuticals, all other exported goods seem to have increased percentages for the given time period and exportation of Great Britain mainly consisted of machinery, vehicles and
phramaceuticals
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pharmaceuticals
throughout the given time frame. It can clearly be observed that
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the vast majority of exported products seem to be machinery and vehicles with approximately one-
third
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both of these categories saw only
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% increase over the given period.
On the other hand
, organic chemicals occur to have the least rates for both years with 7% and 10% respectively in 2010 and 2015 and their export rates went up by 3% over 5 years. Interestingly, Pharmaceuticals experienced a decrease of 9% over the given time frame,
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the percentage of exported plastic products went up from 9% in 2010 to 13% in 2015.
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