You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

Dear sir, A reason for writing
this
letter regarding a job opening in the City Museum shop. Undoubtedly, I am looking for
such
a great opportunity. Basically, I am really inspired by its surrounding. My name is Kailash Kamble and I am having 4 years
experience
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as a supervisor in a shopping store. Currently, I am working with the
Wall-mart
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store
since
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last
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4 years. I was an active member of a cash counter team. I do have experience in various departments.
For instance
, Sales, Cash counter,
Display
. Though, I have handled the
display
department with an assistant successfully for more than 6 months. Recently I went through an English newspaper where a specified advertisement is published and I think it is matched my requirement as well as for the required ideal candidate.
Firstly
, it is near to my residential place
similarly
I am personally interested to handle
this
kind of opportunity. I do have experience in various departments.
For instance
, Sales, Cash counter,
Display
. Though, I have handled the
display
department with an assistant successfully for more than 6 months. Recently I went through an English newspaper where a specified advertisement is published and I think it is matched my requirement as well as for the required ideal candidate.
Firstly
, it is near to my residential place
similarly
I am personally interested to handle
this
kind of opportunity. Yours faithfully, Kailash Kamble.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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