When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. Do you agree or disagree?

To some people, the most essential factor when applying for the

job

is a remuneration. Personally, I believe that there are some other elements which are equally important as

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molument. It is understandable why the size of salary is considered as

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significant factor sometimes in

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ob application. It

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because

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people need to

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sustain

their life, pay

untility

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utility

bills, spend for person’s need and desires.

Moreover

, some

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people

want to secure a good education for their children and taking care of their parents

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, which is tend to be extravagant. In case they do not achieve strong financial capability, they would like to have more burden to bear. And it would be more serious if applicants live in

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big cities where have high living standards.

However

, I argue that other crucial elements

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workplace and love of work should be carefully examined when seeking for a

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.

Firstly

, employee

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to work effectively at

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harmonious

ambience. The colleagues and employer, with whom

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pplicant is going to work should be cooperative, friendly and make up a good team, people would be motivated and produce more productive results.

Besides

, loving a

job

should be taken into account. Provided that people have passion and enthusiasm for the

job

, people would invest most of their time and a lot of effort

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the final products .

For example

, those who are interested in

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photography

, they sometimes spend almost a day just to shoot somethings to get the best achievement.

Although

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photography profession does not help photographer have abundant life or achieve high salary, many people have pursued

this

job

and continually contributed to

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photography

field. To conclude,

although

I can not deny the fact that money has an important role to play in people’s

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, I argue that

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workplace and love of

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should be carefully considered in

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