Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. -> Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It appears that an article is missing before the word government. Consider adding the article.
The noun phrase new alternative seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun plenty in your sentence. Consider removing it.
The noun phrase ecosystem seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The word adapt doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase public seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The word there may be used incorrectly. Review the following notes to determine the appropriate usage for your context.
It appears that the phrase a biggest profits does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
It appears that an article is missing before the word alternative. Consider adding the article.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.