Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that ,in today’s world ,subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.

Several people think that the most important course that students should

study

is

History

.While some people argue that there are

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courses that important more than

History

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such

as Science and Technology.From my point of view,

another

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subjects are more important than

History

. On the one hand, more and more people who believe that

History

is the essential subjects because it makes students know about their countries in the past.There are many reasons why people think like

this

.

Firstly

, if learners

study

History

, they will know about their cultures and languages.

Secondly

, they know about

History

, it is not wrong, perhaps they will maintain their cultures.

Lastly

, they should know about what time

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their countries set up.

For example

, I am Thai, so

i

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learn about

History

of Thailand.Not only places that I learn but

also

everything that

happen

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in the past

such

as Kings,dresses and languages.

On the other hand

, others argue that

History

is not as crucial than

another subjects

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another subject

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such

as Math and English.There are a lot of factors

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this

cause.

Firstly

, they think that when they grow up and work, they are not necessary to

use

in their jobs.

Secondly

, some people do not want to remember it.

Lastly

,

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coures

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courses

course

are very useful.

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example, people who learn English, they can

use

it in the future or in the public to talk with tourists or

use

in their works.

However

, people who learn

History

, they can not

use

it in their

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lives

life

lifes

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.

Therefore

, these are reasons why that people require to

study

another courses

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. To sum up, every

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are important for students.

However

, some people think that

History

is not as important as another course.While

,

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other people argue that

History

is

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ery important course that students should

study

at school and I believe that learners should

study

another subjects

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another subject

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more than

History

.