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The consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. compares them with the percentages in your own opinion.

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compares
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 the percentages of electronics items owned by
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betwen
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between
 1972 to 1983. In general, it shows that
television
 had gained the most popular item in Britain whereas,
d
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ishwasher had the lest used among
british
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 people. It can be seen that
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 almost
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third
 of
british
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 households had used central heating machine in 1972.
this
rate
 had been increased by each year and it reached almost double during 1983.
Television
 is the more common and
poular
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popular
 item in Britain. Almost 93% of households had used
television
 and
this
rate
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98% in ten years.
On the other hand
, video is introduced by British people in 1983.Only 18% of houses used those items in 1983.
In addition
 to,
vaccum
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vacuum
Vaccum
 cleaner, refrigerator washing machine,had gained the same popularity after
television
. Approximately 75% of households had those durables and
this
rate
 reached
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almost 90% in 10 years. Interestingly, the dishwasher users
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 3% in 1978 and it raised over only 5% in 1983.
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Furthermore
, due to increasing
rate
 of popularity telephone users
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 reached
to
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42% to 77% in 1972 and 1983 respectively. To conclude, overall at a glance,
television
 got more attention than any other electronics items. while
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dishwasher got
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less
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 users.
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