The advantages of robots doing the basic serving functions in the entertainment, leisure and retail sectors of the economy outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The noun phrase robot seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the subject pronoun it and the verb bring are not in agreement. Consider changing the verb.
It appears that an article is missing before the word robot. Consider adding the article.
It appears that error free is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
It appears that the is unnecessary in this context. Consider removing it.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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