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Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

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Today, in
this
techological
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technological
 era, new games evolved
everyday
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, children like to
access
c
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omputer and play
video
 games. There are pros and cons of playing
video
 games and
serching
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searching
 on computers for children. In below paragraph
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I discuss both views.
Firstly
, there
are
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a
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the
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dvantage of
access
 computer and playing games, it helps in
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tudy. Many computer games
allows
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 to read
i
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nstruction before
start
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 the
game
 which
allow
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allows
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 children to understand the
game
 and follow the things
mannually
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manually
,
this
 quality helps children to focus
in
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s
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tudy as well as in other projects.
In addition
 to
this
,
access
comuters
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computers
 helps children keep updated with new technology and
also
 it helps in school projects.
On the other hand
, though playing
video
 games have some advantages, there are some disadvantages,
tennegers
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teenagers
 get easily addicted
with
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 new things and they get involved much more and they play
g
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ame all night which affects on school activity.
Furthermore
, many
video
 games are violent which create many negative things to
thier
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their
 minds and lead to crime.
Also
,
there
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 research shows that obesity and many health problems create due to playing
v
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ideo
game
 because person
sit
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 at one place and has no physical movement, resulting
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many healths problems reported. In
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nut shell
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nutshell
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,
access
 to computers and playing
video
 games has its advantage and disadvantage. it helps
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children
childrens
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children
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 in
s
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tudy as well as helps to focus. while negative effects are children get addict with the games and not focus on their school subjects
also
 create
helath
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health
 problems like obesity and many more.
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