Science tell us about both activities which are good for health and others which are bad. Millon of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is and what can be done to change it ?
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have
its Change the verb form
has
positove
and negative sides. Some Correct your spelling
positive
positives
people
think it is good for human well-being, however
, some people
use science to do negative activities
. This
essay will discuss this
statement and give some useful solutions.
First
of all, the reason why people
continue to do unhealthy things is that they have too much stress such
as the problem of working condition, family relationship and friendship.This
means people
may take illegal drugs
which
invented by scientists who tend to have bad purposes. Delete the pronoun
apply
In addition
, young people
often suffer from this
case as they may face different setbacks during their growth and friends between youth may try to attract them to take the drugs
. Those are the reasons for some people
keep doing unhealthy behaviours.
Secondly
, negative activities
can earn lots of money is another reason for some people
doing these activities
such
as selling drugs
. There
many Replace the word
Their
people
addict
on using Change the form of the verb
addicted
drugs
for release pressure, party excitement and medical treatment. Some people
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to
drugs
can earn money easily and there are obvious
some Replace the word
obviously
people
need them. Therefore
, for f
inancial aspect, Add an article
the
people
rather risk themself for survival than not stop doing the
bad Remove the article
apply
activities
.
Finally
, I think governments should manage those situation
to decrease unhealthy Change the determiner
that situation
those situations
activities
which is a threat for
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to
people
’s health. For example
, professional license need
to Change the verb form
needs
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be held
be hold
for someone who Correct your spelling
behold
selling
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sells
drugs
and teach them the right method of using it such
as the maximum amount of using. Furthermore
, giving warning and apply p
enalty for those of who selling Add an article
a
drugs
without l
icense and someone who overtaking it, or even sending them to jail if they addict on Add an article
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drugs
seriously and provide a quitting drug lesson.
In conclusion, although
there are positive things on
science, Verify preposition usage
in
about
it
still Change the pronoun
they
have
some drawbacks, Change the verb form
has
such
as illegal activities
. In my view, g
overnment should produce some useful policy to avoid it continues Add an article
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happen
.Change the form of the verb
happening
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