Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

#friend #country #visit #holidays #travel #plans #places #plan #suggestions #options

Hello JUGNU, I hope you will be good and healthy. I am writing to inform you about

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

month annual holidays

plane

Correct your spelling

plan

show examples

. I have decided to spend my

vacations

Fix the agreement mistake

vacation

show examples

this

time with you and give me

return

Correct article usage

a return

show examples

massage as soon as possible. As you are leaving in Saudi

Arab

Correct your spelling

Arabia

show examples

so that I am very curious about

to see

Change the verb form

seeing

show examples

Islamic places like masjid e Nabvi, GOD home our holy place of Muslims and

mountain

Fix the agreement mistake

mountains

show examples

Firstly

, I will perform Ummrah and

then

I will come to your home to remember child-hold memories. I am booking tickets for the

month as the weather is going to be pleasant. You discussed a new interesting WELL in MAKKAH on phone. I am very excited to visit that place as I have heard in Hades that our prophet (PBUH) entered his spite into its water and well water converted bitter to sweet taste.

This

well water is treated to cure the patient of all kind.so I need

this

drink for my knee problem. I am looking forward to your response to make my trip fruitful with your company. I am

waiting

Add the preposition

forwaiting

show examples

your quick and positive message. Your Friend, M OMAR SAEED

Submitted by Urooj Hayat on Sun Jan 17 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

197 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
It is an undeniable fact that illegal activities are booming at an alarming rate which has threatened the entire, in many nations. This essay will not only highlight the reasons behind this trend but also present some potential measures to take the edge off this menace.
7
band
oday, some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own. Do you think that the popularity of mobile phones is a good or bad thing?
Presently, technology advances way quicker than a majority of humanity can keep up with , thus, significantly increasing the technological incorporation between humans and their cell phones. In the contemporary world, it is important to acknowledge that mobile phones have become an indispensable part of our daily lives, especially for the younger generation. It is my contention that this trend is a multifaceted phenomenon encompassing both positive and negative implications for juveniles.
7.5
band
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take
I would like to apologise for having a bit of noise disturbance at my house last night. I was unaware that your family could not sleep properly due to having inconvenient noises.
8
band
Your neighbour keeps an animal in his / her garden and that is causing problem for you. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: say what the problem is and how it is affecting you suggest how the problem could be solved tell your neighbour what action you might take if the problem is not solved
I am writing this letter to express my concerns caused due to your pet dogs.
8
band
People were happier in previous generations compared to now. To what extent do you agree?
The older era is believed to be more relaxed than the recent era. To begin with, the older era environment is not as stable as it is now. Then, the choice of entertainment in that era is very limited. For those reasons, I strongly disagree with saying the older time is happier than the newer one.

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

The Closing

In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

oday, some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own. Do you think that the popularity of mobile phones is a good or bad thing?

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

People were happier in previous generations compared to now. To what extent do you agree?