Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

#friend #country #visit #holidays #travel #plans #places #plan #suggestions #options

Hello JUGNU, I hope you will be good and healthy. I am writing to inform you about

the

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apply

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month annual holidays

plane

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plan

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. I have decided to spend my

vacations

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vacation

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this

time with you and give me

return

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a return

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massage as soon as possible. As you are leaving in Saudi

Arab

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Arabia

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so that I am very curious about

to see

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seeing

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Islamic places like masjid e Nabvi, GOD home our holy place of Muslims and

mountain

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mountains

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Firstly

, I will perform Ummrah and

then

I will come to your home to remember child-hold memories. I am booking tickets for the

month as the weather is going to be pleasant. You discussed a new interesting WELL in MAKKAH on phone. I am very excited to visit that place as I have heard in Hades that our prophet (PBUH) entered his spite into its water and well water converted bitter to sweet taste.

This

well water is treated to cure the patient of all kind.so I need

this

drink for my knee problem. I am looking forward to your response to make my trip fruitful with your company. I am

waiting

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your quick and positive message. Your Friend, M OMAR SAEED

Submitted by Urooj Hayat on Sun Jan 17 2021

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

197 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

The Closing

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online shopping has various advantages for consumers but may also have disadvantages, such as the loss of some individual privacy. do the advantages of online shopping for the consumers outweight the disadvantages ?

The tendency of human beings copying each other is shown in popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets should have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods, while others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays on-line shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.