You work for a small company. Your manager has asked you to arrange a party in a restaurant for everyone from your workplace. Write a letter to the owner of the restayrant, in the letter: give the reason for the party and details of when you would like to go to the restaurant describe what food the group will require say how many people will attend and ask how much it will cost

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Dear Sir/Madam, I work for Mapna Group and am writing to inquire about making a booking at your restaurant for a business party. There are 25 of us, and we would like to come at 7 p.m. on July 6. The main purpose of

this

event is to thank the employees for their efforts, and we will be presenting some awards to staff members at the end. It would be perfect if we could reserve a private dining room, and in terms of the food, we are interested in option B from your menu, with dessert and coffee, as it provides a lot of variety and is suitable for vegetarian guests. It would be appreciated if you could provide us with a quote for the total cost of food and room for 25 people, and

also

if you could let me know if we can make a reservation for July 6. If you have any questions regarding

this

, please do not hesitate to contact me at 236 777 20 95. Yours faithfully, Shiva Nekooei

Submitted by Mahnaz Mahzari on Sun Jan 17 2021

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