You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do.

Dear Sir, Para-1 I am writing
this
letter regarding a job opening in your company. Write purpose. Para-2 I have
came
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to know about…. Para-3 explain why you want to do… If you could do it on a priority It would be a great help to me. I hope you you will consider
this
. I look
forwarding
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to hearing you. Yours faithfully, Surekha Kamble.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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