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Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?

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niversity
students
 live with their families, while some prefer to stay away from home as their universities are situated in different places. There are advantages and disadvantages to both
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situations. If university
students
 live with their family members there are both benefits drawbacks.
Firstly
, one major advantage is that staying with family avoids
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dditional cost of accommodation.
Secondly
, they enjoy family support in terms of sharing meals and possibly sharing a room with their siblings.
However
, the situation
also
 has disadvantages. Family routines are often disruptive and can disturb the
study
 routines.
In addition
, there might be a case where a guest or relative visits you, without a dedicated space in
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tudy, it will be difficult to keep up with regular routines.
On the other hand
, when
students
 live away from home
also
 face challenges. The main downside is to find
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suitable accommodation, which is close to the university.
Also
, the rents are high and
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dditional burden on the student.
However
, there are some advantages to stay away from home, as you get enough time to
study
.
In addition
,
students
 can collaborate with other
students
 and follow
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tudy schedule and
also
 motivate them to get good bands in their exam. In conclusion, it completely depends on
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hoice of the student and the current situation where he is living in. There are potential advantages and drawbacks from staying away from family
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