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Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gym or sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in so doing. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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most of the staff are praised for their work
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 and given bouns of their
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umber of stance in favour of my stance,
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 employees to significantly focus in the
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likewise
 providing them free membership to the gym or health clubs which would make them fit and
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2020 Edition" conducted
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research and stated that most the
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team members
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 performance and the organisation was able to achieve their goals if they are mentally stable and fit. In my view, based on the arguments outlined above despite some negative drawback the advantage of the subsidizing the employee outweigh, and
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