Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that developed
nations
are much more responsible for the effects of climatic changes than developing
nations
, while others claim that all
countries
should have equal liabilities in order to tackle environmental
problems
. While some people think that developed counties should bear higher liabilities because they have more financial and technological opportunities to solve environmental
problems
, I believe that
countries
should be responsible equally as global
problems
can be tackled only by common efforts. The USA, Europe and Japan should contribute more because
such
countries
have higher GDP and are more technologically advanced than developing
nations
.
In other words
, these
countries
are more prosperous than many Asian, African and South American
countries
,
therefore
, they may spend huge amounts of money on expensive equipment and invest in scientific researches in order to solve different environmental
problems
.
For example
, a recent Cambridge University report found that the USA has the highest GDP in the world, that would allow
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merican government to make
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greatest impact in tackling the
problems
of global warming, water security and other crucial issues.
However
, I believe that it is not fair when only one country tackles global
problems
.
On the other hand
, it is possible to solve environmental
problems
only by contributions of all counties. By signing international treaties and establishing international organisations, the governments of all
countries
may try to protect the Earth by common efforts.
For instance
, UNEP was established by all UN
memebers
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members
in order to protect the environment of the planet. The work of
this
international organization has already had a positive impact on
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olution of many
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,
such
as
problems
of polar ice melting and shrinking of habitats.
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is why
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I believe that
countries
should be
untited
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united
and solve global
problems
together. In conclusion,
although
some people believe that more prosperous
nations
should have higher responsibility
bacause
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because
they have more material and technological possibilities, it is better for
countries
to have joint responsibilities that could let them solve global
problems
more successfully by common efforts.
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