Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, most of they should be taught practical courses in their university , as it will mitigate the educational cost
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people have chosen Remove the article
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technical Remove the article
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subjects
rather than theoritical
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theoretical
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. It is believed that students should not t
aught arts Change the verb form
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subjects
, that is
philosophy and history, instead
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as well as there
would be more job Add the comma(s)
, as well as there,
oppotunities
after studying practical Correct your spelling
opportunities
subjects
. This
essay will describe why practical subjects
should be given priority over theoritical
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theoretical
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.
To begin
with, practical subjects
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areer. In another word, a person who studies technical Add an article
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subjects
like engineering, pharmacy or veterinary, there
future will be secured as they can get job easily. Replace the word
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For instance
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can establish his career easily on pharmacy if he has studied pharmacology. In c
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one
has studied art subject. Therefore
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ractical sector is crucial to settle the future.
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In addition
, the remuneration which one
can get from such
fields is relatively higher while the study fee is lesser. It is evident that,
the technologists all around the world are paid so high Remove the comma
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that is
incomparable to those who are artists or philosopher. For example
, medical lab technologist of our country gets about 50,000 rupees salary while it is approximately one
third
to those who works as a writer in a renowned newspaper daily. Even though is more expensive to study such
theoritical
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theoretical
subjects
which needs more efforts and hard labor
,they are unable to make desire income. Change the spelling
labour
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less
expenses and efforts practical courses should given preference.
In conclusion, practical courses should Change the quantifier
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more importance while teaching in universities as it can Change the verb form
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plenty of opportunities along with relatively more incentives comparing to those Change the verb form
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theorical
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theoretical
subjects
. Thus
, I concur with the afforementioned
statement that universities should teach technical Correct your spelling
aforementioned
subjects
rather than theoritical
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theoretical
subjects
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