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The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write 180-220 words.

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Travel
 is one of the types of vacation where the traveller can expand his own knowledge, get a lot of fascinating sensations and experience.
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travel
 and there is a statement which means that It is
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best to
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 in a guided
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. In my point of view, I can partially agree, because there have own benefits and drawbacks of travelling with
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roup or alone. And I’m going to write about
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ros and cons of
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roup.
First
 of all, travelling with
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uided
group
 is much safer than travelling yourself and experienced chaperone can offer the best knowledge and give you exciting information about the trip. The experienced guide will always plan the schedule and explain the importance of the site and its historical significance.
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uide can choose the most appropriate routine and schedule when visiting many different places. It is not only guaranteeing your safe trip but
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 gives them wide knowledge.
On the other hand
, you will not have your own route that you would like to walk.
This
 means that you can easily walk through and not replace the important place you planned to visit.
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, you will not have time to get a better look at any sculpture or fascinating scenery, because the guide has a plan that you must go through in a day. In the end, I can say that I partially agree with the statement, because if you have your own plan for
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 with a
group
 would not be a good idea. But you must make sure that your path is safe. If you need good company and professional information about places,
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 with a
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 will be the best option.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • safety
  • organization
  • knowledgeable
  • itinerary
  • local customs
  • language barrier
  • freedom
  • flexibility
  • random
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