Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with a high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with

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opinion and think that work vindication is much more important than payroll. First of all, I believe that office comfort gives people a sense of fulfilment that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high income, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience,

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person won’t enjoy his life.

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one’s interests will always bring pleasure and a feeling of well-being.

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, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices ,not because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science. That’s why it’s more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy than to look only at a high stipend.

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, doing what you like keeps you motivated and

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leads to career growth.

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, there is a strong relationship between

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well-being and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results than those, who put a salary in the first place.

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, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday career despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer. And after enduring years of ups and ,downs he became one of the most famous and well-paid authors of the twentieth century.

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, the advantages of jobs that keep you satisfied outweigh the

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of a low wage from a long-term perspective.

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, I strongly believe that task amusement is more beneficial than a high fee because it makes people happy and motivated.