Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people reveal their opinions about the negative effect of
climate
change
that causes bad time in
business
. Meanwhile, others think
this
environment
issues
could lead
more
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creative opportunities in the
business
. According to
this
statement, I believe that
climate
change
is the importance
issues
induced by human especially in the industrials which involving in
business
.
Climate
change
can make the
business
need to restrict their rules in their industrial factors to adapt to globalize environmental
issues
.
However
, it the sign of an improvement through the
business
models to live as a sustainable
business
and harmless to the resources of the planet as much as they can. It is a tendency to believe that
climate
issues
are the big factors that cause a negative effect on
business
.
For example
, many industrial factories
such
as water drinking companies are now facing
to
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the problem of massive draughts and rare
of
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freshwater to manufactured.
This
reason is from the
climate
issues
which including greenhouses effect and the increasing of ocean levels and destroyed balance of freshwater in many locations around the world. The water company has less production than
the
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consumption requires.
This
is why
climate
change
issues
are
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affected
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the
business
. From another point of view,
There
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are the greatest opportunities for
business
to create their ways of a sustainable company.
For instance
, the big department stores
such
as Pink N Pay or Wall Marts are now reducing the plastic bag and encourage the customers to concerns more about environmental
issues
. These company will
change
the money for whom that need the plastic bag when they come to the shopping
center
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.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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