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Travelling is one of the most popular recreational activities we have. Some people like to travel alone, while others like to travel with a group of people. What would you prefer, travelling alone or travelling with some people?

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Nowadays, travelling has become the most leisure activities. A number of us would choose to go on a journey alone and others would enjoy doing it with a group of
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This
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, and what I will choose. To start off with, I personally enjoy travelling in a group. The most obvious reason is that it will be safer to visit a place that you have never been
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 with some
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 around you. Because you will never know how safe that place is or how the
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 there. That means if you are in a group, there will be less chance of your personal properties getting stolen, or you being harassed.
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, you will tend to have less free
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. The reason is that
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 has laces they want to visit, and
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 has to listen to one another’s ideas. There is
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 a limited amount of
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,
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 means not
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 gets a chance to go to the place they like. Some
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 believe that travelling solo can gain more personal experience, which is the most vital thing on the journey. They agree that you will have a peaceful
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 alone, no one talking to you, is just you having a quiet and precious moment.
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 you can reflect on your own experience better,
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 what you notice and what you have learned.
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, a number of
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 might feel lonely if they are alone
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 because you are all going to rely on yourself, you are going to have meals by yourself and no one to share wonderful moments with.
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, it can become a difficult
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 to go through when you are alone. In conclusion,
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 has different perspectives so they might choose differently from others. But I personally prefer travelling in groups, there will be lots of amazing
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 with your friends and it can be much
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easier!
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