Travelling is one of the most popular recreational activities we have. Some people like to travel alone, while others like to travel with a group of people. What would you prefer, travelling alone or travelling with some people?
Nowadays, travelling has become the most leisure activities. A number of us would choose to go on a journey alone and others would enjoy doing it with a group of
people
. This
essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of travelling alone and with some people
, and what I will choose.
To start off with, I personally enjoy travelling in a group. The most obvious reason is that it will be safer to visit a place that you have never been before
with some Change preposition
to before
people
around you. Because you will never know how safe that place is or how the people
there. That means if you are in a group, there will be less chance of your personal properties getting stolen, or you being harassed. However
, you will tend to have less free time
. The reason is that everyone
has laces they want to visit, and everyone
has to listen to one another’s ideas. There is also
a limited amount of time
, that
means not Correct pronoun usage
which
everyone
gets a chance to go to the place they like.
Some people
believe that travelling solo can gain more personal experience, which is the most vital thing on the journey. They agree that you will have a peaceful time
alone, no one talking to you, is just you having a quiet and precious moment. As a result
of that
you can reflect on your own experience better, Add a comma
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for
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what you notice and what you have learned. Add the comma(s)
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However
, a number of people
might feel lonely if they are alone,
because you are all going to rely on yourself, you are going to have meals by yourself and no one to share wonderful moments with. Remove the comma
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Consequently
, it can become a difficult time
to go through when you are alone.
In conclusion, everyone
has different perspectives so they might choose differently from others. But I personally prefer travelling in groups, there will be lots of amazing time
with your friends and it can be much more
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