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Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and chemicals. What are the advantages to this? Do you think that advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

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These days, many people enjoy having
meals
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 more compared to the past. The things that made it possible are preservatives and chemicals in processed
foods
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 and ready-made
meals
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. In my view, the simplicity to prepare and the ability to be preserved outweigh the disadvantages.
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, its simplicity allows cooks to prepare delicious
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 easily. As processed
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 are born in order to reduce the processing time, generally individuals can eat them by just boiling or baking even without seasoning.
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 might be a significant advantage for busy modern persons as those
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 let them
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 relish daily
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.
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, its capability of saving is crucial not only in daily life
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 but
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 in an emergency situation. For general days, as modern people are busy and have less time to go shopping, pre-cooked
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 will save them by reducing the need for the frequency of getting products.
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, as persons should prepare
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 for emergency circumstances, preservable
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 are useful in order to be ready for the time at emergency which is unpredictable when it comes. Contrary, some people say that preservatives and chemicals
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 in pre-prepared
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 might have detrimental effects
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 health and it will overweigh the advantages.
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, even the chemicals have negative effects on the human body, since the food companies are responsible to produce those
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, the damage to customers’ health must not be
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. In conclusion, since the disadvantage is not sizable, the advantages which are its ease and
preserveness
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preserves
 will outweigh the disadvantages.
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