one people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenage should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views on what

subjects

were focused on by

students

in their

study

. Some people believe that

students

ought to learn all

subject

when they are in school while I agree with those who think that teenagers should concentrate on the most

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or best

subjects

which were found by

students

. On one hand, the curriculum is found the most suitable for all

students

.

First

of all, all

subjects

were verified by the Ministry of Education so the teenager can be follow those

subject

for the time when they

study

.

Such

as mathematic helps

students

has better at calculating, history brings

student

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the student

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to historic place or event.

In other words

, all

subject

are quite significant for

the

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preparation before teenagers find their jobs.

On the other hand

,

subjects

which find the most excited always make

student

really want to

study

. The moods of a

student

before

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the lesson are important because the

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of leaner helps them absorb depth knowledge .

For instance

, the

student

who loves math always gets a high score at that

subject

and really want to find something harder and enhance their knowledge.

Furthermore

, the

subject

which

students

want to

study

can help them find relative jobs,

hence

students

are easy to get a high position and good salary on their career. In conclusion, all

subject

was quite needed for all

student

in their

study

but they should find their best

subject

to get more interesting

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them.