Some people think that video games are advantageous while others believe video games are harmful to the people who play them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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thinking power, better hand at computers,
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, team management, health
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, disrupt studies,
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and computer
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gained popularity among youngsters and adults mainly. There are arguments about whether these
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positive or negative effects on the individuals involved in them. I believe that there are certain negatives
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benefits but harmful impacts can be avoided with controlled screen time.
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both sides in detail. On the one side,
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improved cognitive power is the main advantage for players of video
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. These
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tasks
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require skills
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