Travelling is one of the most popular recreational activities we have. Some people like to travel alone, while others like to travel with a group of people. What would you prefer, travelling alone or travelling with some people?

Nowadays the most trendy activities we have is travelling. We all have different opinions
such
as some people like to travel in
groups
but other people like to travel alone. In
this
essay, I’m going to talk about
advantages
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and disadvantages of both viewpoints. Travelling with
friends
or in
groups
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the satisfying rate mostly depends on the members who are travelling with you. If you have similar interests and
travelling
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plans you are highly likely to be satisfied with your trip. The advantages of travelling in
groups
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that you have someone to rely on during the trip and you will not be lonely or struggle with safety issues.
However
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there are disadvantages as well,
such
as if you have different opinions and start to argue the whole plan might ruin and you will get less alone time to travel alone.
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you are less likely to talk to strangers and make new
friends
.
On the other hand
, travelling alone you can do what you want to do, where you want to go and there will be no waiting time
such
as waiting for your
friends
or spending time where you didn’t want to go and so on. The benefit of travelling alone is you can meet new people and it’s easier to experience their cultures. But the disadvantages of travelling alone is you are more likely to have safety problems and you might feel lonely. In
conclusion
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I prefer travelling in
groups
because it's safer and if you have great members you will make awesome memories with my
friends
and members.
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you may feel more comfortable
traveling
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in a group. You don’t have to worry about safety issues.
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