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Several countries disburse salaries to jobless persons on a specific time frame basis. Some may say that it shows a positive impact on society, but in my opinion, it shouldn’t be done because it creates laziness among them and decreases the rate of employment

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In
this
 era,
everthing
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everything
 is getting so expensive day by day that normally can not afford the price of regular needs. Some countries like to pay their
nation
's
people
 salaries if
they
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arethey
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 jobless. Some
people
thinks
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this
 is
right
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the right
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 decision and but my opinion is against
with
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apply
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this
 point of view.
To begin
 with, helping
nation
 pupil in their bad time or especially in lockdown are become like
boon
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a boon
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 for them
for instance
, In the situation of Covid-19, lots of humans lost their jobs. Meanwhile,
government
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the government
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 took the
first
initative
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initiative
 to help their country
people
 with some amount of salary for 3-months.
Moreover
,
this
 step is
also
 very helpful for old or senior citizens because some times they are not capable to control their expenses in their very old age and in
this
 case,
this
 is really helpful for them and shows a positive impact on society. According to my opinion,
this
 kind of steps are not good for growing countries
for example
, if
government
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the government
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 always ready to help their
nation
's pupil in their bad time and ready to pay their bills, that makes
people
 lazy and
irresposible
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irresponsible
 because they know if something to them or their country
then
government
 always be ready to help them.
Moreover
,
sometime
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people
 misuse
the
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apply
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government
 facilities like
instead
 of keeping safe their money, they do extravagant expenditure. In the end, the idea of
disburse
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disbursing
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 salaries to jobless
people
 is not bad but in some case that stops the growth or development of
nation
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the nation
a nation
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 and makes country
people
 lazy and irresponsible from their
resposiblies
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responsible
through
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throughout
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 their
nation
. In that case,
government
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the government
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 should take care
both
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of both
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 sides and take
a
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the
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 right
decison
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decision
.
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