Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, more and more
youths
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are being indulged in smoking, and it has become
main
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reason
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for acute
illness
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and
death
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. Some
argue
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that
governments
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should
ban
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cigarette
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and
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tobacco related
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products
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for public
welfare
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;
however
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, I completely disagree with
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statement
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and
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will discuss why. Nowadays, more and more
youths
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are being indulged in smoking, and it has become
main
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the main
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reason
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for acute
illness
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and
death
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. Some
argue
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that
governments
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should
ban
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cigarette
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and
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tobacco related
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tobacco-related
show examples
products
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for public
welfare
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;
however
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, I completely disagree with
this
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statement
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and
this
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essay
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will discuss why. Nowadays, more and more
youths
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are being indulged in smoking, and it has become
main
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the main
show examples
reason
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for acute
illness
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and
death
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. Some
argue
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that
governments
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should
ban
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cigarette
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and
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tobacco related
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tobacco-related
show examples
products
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for public
welfare
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;
however
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, I completely disagree with
this
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statement
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and
this
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essay
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will discuss why. Nowadays, more and more
youths
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are being indulged in smoking, and it has become
main
Add an article
the main
show examples
reason
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for acute
illness
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and
death
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. Some
argue
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that
governments
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should
ban
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cigarette
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and
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tobacco related
Add a hyphen
tobacco-related
show examples
products
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for public
welfare
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;
however
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, I completely disagree with
this
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statement
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and
this
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essay
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will discuss why.
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