You are a student at University of Sydney. Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of who you are, what happened and asking what you should do to get a new ID card.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to report to you regarding my

card

that has been stolen yesterday. I am Pragna Patel, a final year engineering student at the University of Sydney. I need your help because my

card

has been stolen at quaker bridge mall on route 27. A person in a black t-shirt with a height of approximately 5 ft 5 , tried to snatch my wallet but when I started running away from him, unfortunately, he snatched my student

card

. I need your help to file a police complaint against him as my exams are going to start

week and the administration would not allow me to attend them without my

card

. I requested a duplicate

card

but it will take almost 2 weeks to receive it. I wait for your reply and you can reach me on my personal contact number mentioned below in case any help needed from my side. Contact : 732402233 Yours faithfully, Pragna Patel

Submitted by pragnapatel027 on Fri Mar 19 2021

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

167 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are a student at University of Sydney. Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of who you are, what happened and asking what you should do to get a new ID card.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and giver your opinion.

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

over population of urban areas has lead to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals tackle these problems.

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