It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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to change the behaviour and learn from their error. This
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discuss that parents
and teachers should monitor incessantly and correct them, and then
discuss that punishment
should not be physical or emotional, followed by a logical conclusion.
Children
are most vulnerable to get affected by surrounding and digital media. It is often getting painful for the parents
and teachers to observe what they watch on the internet or smart devices. Hence
it is mandatory for the parents
and teacher to teach the dangers of online activity and how to conduct themselves properly. It is often the case that children
may hesitate to discuss their problem with their parents
or teachers.Therefore
, it is imperative to block inimical sites from their view which has a possibility of exploiting the kids
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continue their wrong deeds, so punishment
is inevitable to correct them. When parents
and teacher try to discipline their kids
, they should be very conscious that they do not affect them mentally. Many parents
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Instead
, they can speak with them first
and try to make them understand the consequences of their action. For example
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In conclusion, it is crucial for the
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children
to learn about right and wrong at a young age. Although
punishment
is needed to correct them, parents
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