It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is important for

children

to distinguish between right and wrong

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age. Some would argue that

punishment

is essential for

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kids

to learn from the mistake. It is agreed that

punishment

is necessary for the

kids

to change the behaviour and learn from their error.

This

essay will

first

discuss that

parents

and teachers should monitor incessantly and correct them, and

then

discuss that

punishment

should not be physical or emotional, followed by a logical conclusion.

Children

are most vulnerable to get affected by surrounding and digital media. It is often getting painful for the

parents

and teachers to observe what they watch on the internet or smart devices.

Hence

it is mandatory for the

parents

and teacher to teach the dangers of online activity and how to conduct themselves properly. It is often the case that

children

may hesitate to discuss their problem with their

parents

or teachers.

Therefore

, it is imperative to block inimical sites from their view which has a possibility of exploiting the

kids

.

For example

, as per

survey

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from Oxford University government had seen

80

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% drop in online exploitation after the introduction of "social behaviour cases". Despite

this

, many

children

continue their wrong deeds, so

punishment

is inevitable to correct them. When

parents

and teacher try to discipline their

kids

, they should be very conscious that they do not affect them mentally. Many

parents

support

the

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corporal punishments which may affect young people mentally and physically and starts developing an aversion.

Instead

, they can speak with them

first

and try to make them understand the consequences of their action.

For example

, as per the Indian government recent survey, the pupils who go through

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physical assault

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age has a more chance of getting arrogant when they grow up.

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, the government had passed a law to cease

the

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physical

punishment

in schools. In conclusion, it is crucial for

the

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children

to learn about right and wrong at a young age.

Although

punishment

is needed to correct them,

parents

should be vigilant about the impact of the external surroundings and correct

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affecting them mentally.