Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some

people

claim that it is important to

study

the

science

of

food

and how to prepare it at

school

while other

people

believe that important

subjects

should be learned at schools.

Although

learning important

subjects

such

as English and History is important, I consider learning the

science

of

food

and how to prepare

meals

should be taught at

school

. Many

people

believe that children should

study

the

science

of

food

and in fact, the

science

of

food

is taught at

school

in many countries. When I was a student in Japan, I had a

subject

only for learning the

science

of

food

and how to handle

food

properly. It is great for

students

to learn

this

subject

when they are smaller as they realize how important it is to appreciate

food

. By studying

this

subject

,

students

are

also

able to learn how to prepare healthy

meals

without any support from adults.

However

, other

people

discuss

students

should learn important

subjects

at

school

. Schools need to be where

students

study

important

subjects

and they should not use their

school

time for something that they can learn at home or on the internet.

Students

go to

school

to learn important

subjects

that will be useful to pursue their

further

education and careers. In my opinion, it is great to

study

the

science

of

food

at

school

. Many

people

do not know how to prepare healthy

meals

at home even after they become adults. In order to prepare healthy

meals

, you do not only need to know

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receipts

, but

also

nutrition in each

ingredients

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ingredient

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. If you do not have the knowledge of nutrition,

meals

can be unhealthy even if you try to cook healthy

meals

. To conclude

with

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,

although

some

people

claim that

students

should

study

important

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the important

an important

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subject

at

school

,

students

can

also

benefit from learning the

science

of

food

and how to prepare it.