Write a letter explaining water issues in your apartment

#water #apartment

Daniel/ Uzoma, I think it

high

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is high

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time you escalate

this

water

issue in my unit to your management if you have not done so. Since I moved into the unit in 2016, I have battled

this

problem of

water

running dry in my

tank

simply because anytime you pump

water

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to water

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the

tank

is not filled or sometimes

water

does not get into the

tank

. Jide had tried to

solved

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this

problem when I

first

moved in but to no avail. I

then

took it upon myself to let your staff understand the routine of shutting up some taps to enable me

get

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water

when they pump. I am tired of reminding them to do

this

every time.

Instead

of them

to follow

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following

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the routine they take a ladder to start climbing up the manway to check the

tank

. The pop in

this

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these

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areas

have

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cracks all over the edges

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...

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I am always running out of

water

sometimes in the middle of the night or when taking my bath not to mention the

colored

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coloured

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water

because

water

is always at

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its

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lowest point in the

tank

. I have at the backyard jars filled with

water

just

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in case

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incase

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in case

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. I have resolved to find other alternatives possibly get a 1000

liters

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litres

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tank

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the backyard. I am just tired of

this

kind of service. Regards, Chris

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Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

223 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter explaining water issues in your apartment

The Greeting

In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in studies. causes amd solutions?

Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stopped immediately lo stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?