Write a letter explaining water issues in your apartment

#water #apartment

Daniel/ Uzoma, I think it

high

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time you escalate

this

water

issue in my unit to your management if you have not done so. Since I moved into the unit in 2016, I have battled

this

problem of

water

running dry in my

tank

simply because anytime you pump

water

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the

tank

is not filled or sometimes

water

does not get into the

tank

. Jide had tried to solve

this

problem when I

first

moved in but to no avail. I

then

took it upon myself to let your staff understand the routine of shutting up some taps to enable me to get

water

when they pump. I am tired of reminding them to do

this

every time.

Instead

of them following the routine they take a ladder to start climbing up the manway to check the

tank

. The pop in these areas has cracks all over the edges. I am always running out of

water

sometimes in the middle of the night or when taking my bath not to mention the coloured

water

because

water

is always at its lowest point in the

tank

. I have at the backyard jars filled with

water

just in case. I have resolved to find other alternatives possibly get a 1000 litres

tank

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the backyard. I am just tired of

this

kind of service. Regards, Chris

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7 paragraphs

224 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Write a letter explaining water issues in your apartment

The Greeting

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