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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days, many individuals decide to go to universities rather than working, and typically
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 career.
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 course that
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 to be useless in the future. In my view, it is better to study whatever they want to.
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, some people might say if the university allows
students
 to learn whatever they like, it would be
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university
students
 are precious owing to their potential, they are hoped to contribute to
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society in the future.
However
, if the
students
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society, it might be the waste of time and the environment that the individuals put in.
On the contrary
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learn what they like is that people who
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 expert to something will increase and it might be a benefit to the society. As the situation is always fluctuating, things “useful” cannot be defined.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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