Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, many individuals decide to go to universities rather than working, and typically
this
is because they want to make
better
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a better

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career.
Therefore
, some
students
struggle to hesitate to choose
the
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course that
seem
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to be useless in the future. In my view, it is better to study whatever they want to.
Firstly
, some people might say if the university allows
students
to learn whatever they like, it would be
the
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waste of resources. As
the
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apply

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university
students
are precious owing to their potential, they are hoped to contribute to
the
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apply

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society in the future.
However
, if the
students
dedicate themselves to the major that will have less contribution to
the
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society, it might be the waste of time and the environment that the individuals put in.
On the contrary
, the benefit of making
students
to
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apply

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learn what they like is that people who
is
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are

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expert to something will increase and it might be a benefit to the society. As the situation is always fluctuating, things “useful” cannot be defined.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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