science research should be funded by government rather than commercial organizations. To what extent do you agree or degree?
It is true that
people
believe only government
should fund for
conducting scientific researches and it should eliminate the financial distribution from commercial organizations. I totally agree Change preposition
apply
that
statement because the benefit of science is supported by national authorities is greater by private bodies.
On the Change preposition
with that
one
hand, one
advantages
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advantage
is
the commercial companies sometimes respond rapidly to current demand than Change the verb form
are
government
. Investors take profitable opportunities to make the most and accumulate more material Correct article usage
the government
possesses
. Replace the word
possessions
Thus
, huge of money provided immediately, such
as in
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in-stock
stock
market, when Add an article
the stock
one
good news is released, thousands of mutual funds and individual investor pour enormous
amount of money to expect science projects could be successful to maximize profits. Taking the Covid-19 as an example, presenting a spectacular opportunity for the pharmaceutical industry, with many companies pursuing in the race to find Add an article
an enormous
best
vaccine to save humanity. If Change the article
the best
vaccine
is truly working, Add an article
a vaccine
the vaccine
government
needs to buy thousands of doses or Add an article
the government
people
have to buy it themselves.
On the other hands, there are significant benefits if governments determine the direction of scientific researches for the well-being of their people
. Firstly
, they must provide constantly adequate funding for university departments related to carry
out research according to public need. Advances in technology and knowledge to achieve sustainable development would be used to benefit Change the verb form
carrying
people
, not investors. Thus
, researches into such
areas like
medicine development or environmental problem solving, Change preposition
as
although
unprofitable outcomes, it
is essential for human beings. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Secondly
, the only involvement of government
in science development Correct article usage
the government
allow
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allows
to eliminate
unnecessary competition among commercial companies which can pursue other areas Change the verb form
eliminating
such
as technology which can be both beneficial to investors and consumers as well. Apple, for example
, has developed an ecosystem in IOS allows
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that allows
people
doing
many functions just Change the verb form
to do
one
platform which save
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saves
time
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the time
of
users in Change preposition
for
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an efficiency
efficiency
way.
In conclusion, commercial enterprises Replace the word
efficient
sometime
carry out scientific research quickly, whereas Replace the word
sometimes
government
needs to access the benefit of those researches to human life and allocate resources to them. However
, with obvious
advantages presented above, Correct article usage
the obvious
government
should take responsibility Add an article
the government
on
those researches.Change preposition
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