Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves by their own.

Whether

children

should be urged to spend their free time in team works or they do things by themselves has been a debatable topic for a long period.

However

, from my standpoint, it is more beneficial if kids are encouraged by parents to engage in groups rather than occupying themselves

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their own. On the one hand, we must encourage

children

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more of their time in group activities. Many specialist

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that the best way that juveniles

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skills which are essential for their future career is letting them interacting each other.

For instance

, empirical research

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that the

cognetive

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cognitive

skills among the

children

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who are in teams are much higher than those who are not.

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, parents should make sure that

children

are not isolated. Encouraging them to work in isolation some times leads to alienation which

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negative

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impact on them.

On the other hand

, studies show that

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adolescent

, those who tend to occupy alone, are less likely to develop relevant knowledge and attitudes which are often demanded by the

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market. To conclude, it is important to motivate the

children

to engage in team activities

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and discourage doing things

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their own.