Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued by some that governments should persuade

companies

to relocate from

cities

to rural areas in order to solve the growing problems of

traffic

and accommodation.

This

essay believes that despite the fact that

cities

might lose a significant amount of money and that pollution levels will

potentialy

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potentially

increase, the benefits of

this

trend,

such

as

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fewer

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traffic

jams and lower real estate prices in

cities

, outweigh its drawbacks. The departure of large syndicates from

cities

would eliminate

traffic

jams. The majority of workers use their private cars in order to arrive at their workplace, so if a smaller number of

companies

will be situated inside the

city

, as a

consequnce

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consequence

less

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people will enter the

city

with their vehicle.

For example

, an individual who works in a factory outside the

city

will not have the need to enter the

city

with his or

hers

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car.

In addition

, another advantage would be a decrease in apartments’ price. If a smaller number of people will work in the

city

, the demand for apartments will fall, and as a consequence

also

the real estate prices.

For instance

, during the Covid

pandemic

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a great number of citizens left the

city

where I live and the rental prices have dropped.

On the other hand

, an increased amount of air pollution could be created.

This

is simply because employees that will continue to live in the

city

will drive their car for longer periods of time and will eventually cause more pollution.

Furthermore

,

cities

might lose a major amount of money.

Companies

are a major source of income for

cities

, due to the high taxes they pay.

For example

, in Tel-Aviv where I currently live, it is estimated that businesses’ taxes comprised

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approxiamtely

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approximately

30% of the total

city

's income. In conclusion, in my opinion, the advantages of

companies

moving to rural areas, which includes

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fewer

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traffic

jams and lower price of flats and houses, outweigh its disadvantages.