Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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science
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quite
essential
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an essential
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subject
for all the primary
students
all over the
world
as it provides basic knowledge of the objects and things related to day-to-day life. If
person
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a person
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wants to study more about
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science
they tend to go to
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university, while others
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to observe
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different subjects. As we can see currently, most
student
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students
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do not choose
science
subject
in
university
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a university
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in many countries. The main reason is that
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science
requires special knowledge and skills to innovate and understand the basic elements. It is
also
more complex rather than doing any other
subject
. The
second
reason is that the
students
think the
science
will quite boring
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since they always have to be in the lab doing observations. The final supporting reason is time because most
students
tend to learn subjects without spending much time. But obviously,
science
requires patience and tolerance. If
students
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choose
science
subject
to begin
their career, there will be some adverse effects
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society. The major effect is
shortage
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a shortage
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of employers related to
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science
,
such
as Doctors, Chemist, Environmental scientists, Geoscientists and Hydrologist.
However
, without those
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the
world
will not
be exist
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as they are doing
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job to our society.
Secondly
, there will be no mentors to recreate the new generation as a scientist, and which will lead to enormous impact
to
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the whole
world
.
Consequently
, I strongly believe
science
is
a
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best
subject
in the
world
because it helps to create new innovations, medicines, and
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materials. The responsibility is that the pre-schools should encourage and teach the value of the
science
, and which will lead enough
students
to choose
science
subject
in near future.
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