Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss both views and include your own opinion and relevant examples from your experience.
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time
or long-time
for their students
. This
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on the safety of kids during the Change the verb form
depend
extreame
weather and focus on Correct your spelling
extreme
festival
season on local to enjoy them. Add an article
the festival
This
essay will discuess
both Correct your spelling
discuss
side
and will provide owe opinion Change to a plural noun
sides
also
.
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the most
importent
thing is short break vacation do better for release stress of Correct your spelling
important
long
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a long
time
studying of subects
in college and it is Correct your spelling
subjects
help
to avoid Replace the word
helpful
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losing
loosing
interest of Correct your spelling
losing
learnning
. As in educational process in schools are not friendly for Correct your spelling
learning
students
at all the time
, such
as more in-class lectures, reading references, lot of homeworks
, Correct your spelling
homework
assigments
etc. after some break Correct your spelling
assignments
students
could take a freash
start and it more Correct your spelling
fresh
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for their education Correct your spelling
effective
also
. Other
thing is Change the wording
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this
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area it could help to Add an article
the local
students
to take complete enjoyment with their families.
On the other hand
, lot of countries has extrame
weather for some months in every year and those Correct your spelling
extreme
time
not suitable for student
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the student
a student
attent
schools. During the Correct your spelling
attend
summer
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summertime
time
kids can stay safe Add a comma
,time
in
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at
home
and spend Add an article
the home
time
with their families and relatives. Also
most families like to travel on Add a comma
,Also
long
vacation with their children and long Add an article
a long
time
break is the best option for that. Children have many opportunities to learn many thing
through Change to a plural noun
things
traveling
and it Change the spelling
travelling
help
to Change the verb form
helps
imporve
their knowledge. Correct your spelling
improve
for example
, pupils could see and learn about cultures, traditions and meet different people from apart of world
.
In conclusion, I Add an article
the world
belive
that both options of short-term and long-Correct your spelling
believe
trem
break are suitable and it must Correct your spelling
term
be consider
with other factors and Change the verb form
be considered
take
the best option by the Correct your spelling
make
educatational
institute or government.Correct your spelling
educational
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