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Many companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform?

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There are many different opinions towards wearing the standard uniform when working. For some
industries
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 it is helpful, while for
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 it is a questioning request.
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 will discuss the pros and cons of standardised dress code, at the
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Firstly
 and foremost, the upside for having the same
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 for employees in the workplace is that the whole place will be looked tidy and bright.
For example
, many companies' receptionists will always wear the same outfit day after day, and it helps
people
 to have
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 for
this
 company.
Secondly
, it aids to increase
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public awareness if the employees are working outdoors. In China, most of the
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delivery
 companies tend to request their
delieverer
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deliverer
 to wear the same coats, shirts and pants with
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 logo on them, in order for
people
 on the street or the
people
 who receive the parcel know more deeply about
this
 brand.
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 industry, it is very unwise to set up the same dress code for everyone. For one, it will reduce the innovation of the
empoyees
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employees
. What's more, creative professionals tend to be working in a more flexible and open-minded environment and
this
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kill the passion to innovate in them.
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 industry, some company may find wearing standard uniform completely useless, because they may never be needing to talk to a
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 face to face. With the rising trend in online shopping, some shops move their business almost all on the internet.
Therefore
, they will not meet the clients other than
typying
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typing
 on the computer or over the phone.
Hence
, how
people
 will look is definitely not one of their priorities to be concerned with, and it will make uniforms absolutely unnecessary. To summarise, for some types of business, it has
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 impact on its brand influence or brand image when staffs wearing the same uniform.
Nevertheless
, it cannot be overlooked that many industries may never need the dress code or it may be harmful
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 your business.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniform policy
  • corporate identity
  • work attire
  • equality
  • professionalism
  • brand image
  • personal expression
  • dress code
  • morale
  • team cohesion
  • security measures
  • cost implication
  • employee satisfaction
  • workplace culture
  • individuality
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