In some countries governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Since the
last
few years economy has been showing undulating changes. Companies
has
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been ceased and
also
new ones has been founded. As time passes, more and more people are worrying about their subsistence due to precariousness.
This
concerning attitude is
also
a typical characteristic
at
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industries too.
Beside
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economical challenges, they
also
have to deal with political restrictions and orders which cannot be broken.
Thus
,
this
kind of enforcement serves as the basis of the
businesses
moving to
countryside
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. Nowadays, it has
became
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an ongoing tendency and newly settlers’ companies rather choose rural
areas
than
for example
the capital city. If we take a closer look, it can be seen
this
trend has several assets. Cheaper property and bigger construction opportunity must be mentioned in the
first
place. Regional
areas
have more space than metropolises which means
businesses
can build much bigger and more convenient complexes unlike in big cities. As well as a
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building where more employee can work helps reducing congestion and
also
helps
reducing
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the quantity of
air-pollution
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in the cities. Equally important to indicate that there is a bilateral benefit both for the
businesses
and the rural towns. Industries can provide job opportunities in distinct positions which is great for the nearby living residents and neighbouring townships can serve as
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workforce for the company.
Also
, worthy to note that adolescents who are living in those
areas
probably would enjoy benefits
such
as summer jobs, scholarships and later full-time job opportunity. In consequence,
more
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and more well-educated young adult would choose countryside living, leading to gradual evolvement and development of the infrastructure. To conclude, moving
businesses
to remote places may result in some serious issues, but the most common result is that the moving clearly appears to be a favour not only the vast majority of urban road users but
also
residents in small
areas
. These advantages overshadow the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional areas
  • big cities
  • encouraging
  • industries
  • businesses
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • economic growth
  • overcrowding
  • traffic congestion
  • employment opportunities
  • balanced regional development
  • preservation of natural resources
  • quality of life
  • cultural diversity
  • lack of infrastructure
  • amenities
  • skilled workers
  • impact on the environment
  • decline in the economy
  • social and cultural challenges
  • integrating
  • new industries
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