You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter: - describe the work yoy have been doing - explain why you can no longer do this work - recommend another person who is interested in the work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in order to inform you that due to some issues at my university I had to finish my work in your helping organisation. In general, my job includes cooking a meal for homeless people and giving portions out near our main railway station. Usually, our team works every day in the evenings from 7 p.m. till 9 p.m. But in most cases, we finish giving away more later. As I said before I can't take part in
this
charity more for the reason of my future exams and
also
there is gonna be my diploma written by
this
June. So
unfortunately
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I can't do my work
proprietly
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propriety
properly
.
However
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,However
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I would like to give you
contacts
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the contacts
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of my friend who really wants to be
usefull
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useful
for people and she would be happy to join your organisation. I would like to glad you for
this
unforgetable
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unforgettable
experience for me and I wish a great development to your deal. I would like to
hearing
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your
desicion
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decision
from you soon.
Sinceresly
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Sincerely
yours, Maria
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