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You recently went shopping at the local supermarket. When you got home and noticed your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase. Write a letter to the supermarket manager explaining what has happened. Tell the manager you are not able to collect the refund and suggest a refund method and say what do you want him to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment with the incident of being overcharged at your shopping mall. Though I have been to
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 place
for buying
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to buy
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grocery
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groceries
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 for a very long time,
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 has happened to me for the first time. Yesterday evening, I went to the supermarket to buy some kitchen and other domestic stuff. I paid bills at counter number 4 using my credit card. The shop was crowded as usual and I was
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 in a hurry as I had to return home to receive someone. Today, when I unpacked all the items and matched them with the receipt given by the counter girl. I found to be cheated with 142 dollars for a magic mop and a pack of vermicelli that I did not purchase. As I have to leave the town for some urgent official work and will be
returned
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 after a week, I request you to refund the amount
in
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 the credit card it was debited from. It would be easier for both me and you as well. Kindly go through the matter and do the needful. I do hope you
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 not lose a regular and loyal customer. I will be waiting to get a response that all is in order. Yours faithfully XYZ
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea or point of discussion to improve coherence and cohesion.
task response
Provide a more detailed explanation of the incident, including the date and time of the purchase, to fully address the task prompt.
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